deviant art





Login
Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour Lost Password?
Deviant Login
Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
About Me Other / Hobbyist Official Beta Tester Joyce FetterollFemale/United States Recent Activity
Deviant for 2 Years
7 Month Premium Membership
Statistics 130 Deviations 1,506 Comments 5,795 Pageviews

Critiques


I like the bold angular shapes of the letters and figure. And the dynamic feel conveys a sense of drama. And the colors are gorgeous. S...


The composition is very good and varied. The pictures and dialogue flow well. You've moved the story quickly without it feeling forced....


His expression is captivating and really feels like we're interrupting him. What strikes me is despite all the gray, despite all the ...

Watchers

Groups

Happiness is a warm latte

Journal Entry: Thu Jul 7, 2011, 5:52 AM





Lattes are always in the plans for the birthday day! :-)

And work but it's only 4 hours and it's still fun even if I'm mostly putting bagels, breads and cookies on trays to bake in the grocery store bakery. (And toting very heavy boxes in and out of the freezer.)

I *really* need to get Blood's Masquerade done so this account isn't just about the graphic novel mentioned in the book! I'm on the final scenes trying to get all the characters to do what they need to in ways that are natural to them ;-)

When I get to the end I'll reward myself by editing the first scene so I can put it up here and get rid of what's there!

(Next step, take down the Christmas decorations on the page!)


Presents for characters (and me! :-)





  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Kat play guitar
  • Reading: Nail Your Novel by Roz Morris
  • Eating: The biggest Maintosh apple I've ever seen
  • Drinking: Water

deviantID

=BloodsMasquerade
Joyce Fetteroll
Artist | Hobbyist | Other
United States
I got inspired to sketch the characters in Blood's Masquerade, the first book in the series my partner and I are writing.

Except for Jasha, none of the drawings came out like the vague images I had of them but now they fit. :-)

The book revolves around the Cresnik, who see themselves as the good vampires, battling to keep the Kudlak, the bad vampires, in check. To complicate the battle, the Cresnik also fight an internal battle against a bacterium that deadens their social emotions and will inevitably turn them Kudlak unless they choose death or find a Chosen, a woman whose blood has a complementary antibody.

Lucien Danishevski is at the heart of the story. Younger than most when the bacterium destroyed his emotions, he's held off the darkness longer than anyone should be able to. Dedicated to fighting the Kudlak, he's a master Hunter, but after seven centuries of fighting the Kudlak and the bacterium he's reached the end of his strength.

Damon, his twin, is torn between supporting his brother's need for release and keeping him alive. Orphaned when young, they had only each other as they shrugged off the oppressive Danishevski families who took them in. Inexplicably, Lucien abandoned Damon to a brutal task master when they were still young and the repercussions have echoed throughout their relationship.

Together, they lead a team of Hunters against the Kudlak preying on Los Angeles.

Dragon Mondragon, an Ancient taciturn Hunter, who has always depended on Lucien's strength against the darkness to renew his own when it flagged. Now, the sincerest repayment may be to support Lucien's end for he knows Damon loves him too much and will fail.

And, to keep the story from being too heavy :-) ...

Mystik Hamrlik is one of the two young Hunters, still a century from feeling the pull of the bacterium's darkness. Deep thinking and friendly, at times his eagerness to understand people draws him to mentally probe beyond their invitation. He struggles against the tradition to respect elders as he understands the depth of damage Dubrava's coddling of Jasha does to his friend's abilities as a Hunter.

Jasha Kirienko good hearted but sees the world in black and white and is often in a flurry of angry frustration when less straightforward views of the world leave him baffled.

Dubrava Zaturetskaya is a 1000 year old self-appointed matriarch of the band of Hunters. A Danishevski before her marriage, she distrusts the twins, still seeing them as the wild orphans of centuries ago who insulted the families who took them in. In many ways she sees clearer than anyone else for she understands Lucien's dedication to duty and refusal to succumb to his own weaknesses could lead him to hold on past his strength. If he turns, he'll be a Kudlak more powerful than the world has ever seen.

Pink Abyss is half fairy, half Swiss. Her father was exiled from the fairy world for mating with a human. Pink is often pestered by morals that whisper to do the right thing, when she was raised by her mother's industrialist family to grab what you need for yourself because no one else will. She provides a "human" veneer for Lucien's Hunters, able to do the day tasks the Cresnik find difficult. Primarily she works on the second volume of her manga style graphic novel, Gothic Pink, that is strongly influenced by the personalities of the Cresnik she lives with.

Zarand Vulchanov, the bad guy, the evil Kudlak and leader of the Kudlak in LA. At one time a childhood friend of the twins, he turned Kudlak far younger than anyone. Zarand knows Lucien still feels the old bonds of their friendship and guilt for allowing Zarand to turn and it's why Lucien has yet to Kill Zarand. He delights in torturing Lucien, especially reminding him that each time Zarand kills or turns a human, it's as though Lucien himself did so.

Sarika Vulchanova, Zarand's sister. Unlike male Cresnik who are turned by the bacterium, female Cresnik who turn have either been forced or have chosen it. Sarika chose it for her own twisted reasons that have nothing to do with Zarand, despite what he assumes.

Michaela Bouchard is small, young and lively, everything Lucien isn't. She's also his Chosen and an equal match in determination and stubbornness so when he decides he's too damaged by the darkness to be with her, she's determined to prove him wrong.

Ilie Kovalcsik is young and barely Cresnik in nature, drawn to technology and computers. He becomes a barrier between the Hunters who believe Lucien is on the edge of turning and Lucien who refuses to reveal he has changed.

Dark Hunger is a goth band and Damon's side project. Music is what keeps the darkness at bay for him and he has carved a band from the Hunters that gives them all a focus beyond the nightly killing. Is this what a secret band of Hunters should be doing? Later, someone will lay into them for all the things they've done that call attention to themselves ;-)

Current Residence: outside of Boston (looking in and glad I don't have to tackle the crazy drivers)
Favourite genre of music: metal, alternative rock
Favourite style of art: manga and anime, grungy stuff
Operating System: OS X of course!
Favourite cartoon character: Kenshin, Emma, Inuyasha, Cho Hakkai (Saiyuki)
Personal Quote: Never do today what you can put off until it doesn't need done anymore.
Interests

Friends

:iconshaybeezy: :iconkxhara: :iconzaralt: :iconsacellon: :icontruepoetryneverdies: :iconfrostdrive: :iconinisipis: :iconkyoux: :icondublufish: :iconmllebienvenu: :iconloominate: :iconapofiss: :iconmeronine: :iconrazuri-chan: :iconbg2-productions: :iconebonysnowwhite: :iconzodiaxia: :iconraecreature: :iconsadcat: :iconvampireangel13:

Comments


:icon:
Add a Comment:
 
:icondanogambler:
~DanoGambler May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for faving^^

--
"You can't forge a good sword without knowing how to use it." (Eyvind the blacksmith)
Reply
:iconinisipis:
Words cannot express my thanks for your Devwatch:+devwatch: of my works...
so i'll just use this nifty emoticon. Cheers :ahoy:


:iconleleleplz::iconthanksplz:
:iconmonroeplz:

--
ART COMMISSION OPEN - [link]

DEXTROMETHORPHAN PHENYLPROPANOLAMINE GUAIFENESSIN is the generic name of TUSARAN Forte.
Reply
:iconplhunterblaze:
Thanks for the fav :D

--
"Im right on target, keepin da dream alive"
Reply
:iconfrostdrive:
*FrostDrive Apr 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
sorry for the barrage of comments but

Would you have any tips on keeping on with a comic?
like, working on it even when you don't want to.
Or, avoiding stopping just to make a quick doodle because those are easier.
basically, how you so determined? :iconherpderpplz:
PS: Gothic Pink has a really cool ring to it. :D
Reply
:iconbloodsmasquerade:
=BloodsMasquerade Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No problem :-)

What has helped me is having the script for the chapter written out. So when I finish drawing a chapter I take a week break to write the next. And what helps me write the chapter script is having the whole 3 book series written. (I wrote it for National Novel Writing Month 2 years ago.)

The chapters are drifting from what I wrote for the series so it's not like I have 300 comic pages planned out in advance. ;-) But what writing out the series gave me is the overall story, a knowledge of the characters and several story arcs.

The first 3 chapters I drew thumbnails for the pages. The current chapter I'm just relying on the script.

In fact the pages drift from what I write for the chapter so I can't even plan 20 pages successfully yet. ;-) So the chapter script is a guide. But it gives me a good idea of what I want on the week's page when I sit down to draw.

Without a script I think trying to break a story down in your head into a chapter down into a page down into a few panels each time you drew a page would be daunting.

And what's helped me keep on track is I don't have a dead line. I have a start line. Instead of trying to finish on Friday (the day I upload) that's the day I begin the next page. Generally I'm a procrastinator but I really didn't want to get into the mad rush/recover cycle I see so many comic book artists doing for every page.

Well, that was a novel in itself ;-) Hope there's something in there that helps!
Reply
:iconfrostdrive:
*FrostDrive Apr 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's an interesting way to do it.
I like how everyone seems to make their comics differently. (between writing, drawing, and finalization etc. )

What I've been doing was just rough draft thumbnails on pages in my sketchbook. With that I'm up to page 80. But I ceased that last week, and started doing final pages from the beginning, because I kinda felt like I was getting no where by doing the thumbnails, because nothing was finished.

But I find now with doing the finalized pages digitally, I"m being wayyy too critical of it and I'm taking DAYS for each page.
Like, this is the current one I'm working on. [link]
and I'm only like, 70% happy with it. xD
Reply
:iconstonedtodeath:
=Stonedtodeath Apr 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow very nice gallery! your comic art is fantastic! :D

--
Commissions: [link]
Reply
:iconbloodsmasquerade:
=BloodsMasquerade Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aw, thank you very much! :-) I admire your bold style in your gallery. Awesomely distinctive.
Reply
:iconstonedtodeath:
=Stonedtodeath Apr 28, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :) and thank you so much! :D

--
Commissions: [link]
Reply
:iconfrostdrive:
*FrostDrive Apr 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
YOu deserve a LOT more watchers for all the comic pages you have.
I was shocked to see you only have 40 something. D:
Reply
:icon:
Add a Comment: